Mistake

April 16, 2015Written by Vidya Subramanian

I could feel my heart thumping and beads of perspiration sliding down my forehead as I took a deep breath and stepped onto the metallic rail that slithered into the night. My body stiffened as I saw a beam of light emerging from the tunnel.

“This is it,” I thought as I squeezed my eyes shut, waiting for the train to wipe me out into the darkness. The noise was deafening as the train came roaring towards me but as it died down I realised that I had been waiting on the wrong track. Or perhaps I stood frozen on the cusp of my second life..on the right track.

Vidya Subramanian is a a novice blogger and loves writing with a passion. She blogs at http://ofthisthatandjustabouteverything.blogspot.in

Short Stories death, life, second chances, tunnel

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